Nah mate, i live in Germany but still sad for all who lives in Switzerland
Bah, more germans... 
Posts by Lexvhw
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top kek ^
Funny part- Jews don't say "Oy vey" anymore :} It's "old Hebrew" But still nice kek
Lol I don't know, I just typed in: "That's racist stereotype"
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Omfg your serious? That can't be true i thought you needed a pen tot dig :O
You can also hit the ground with your fists so much, until the ground under you breaks!
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I don't play 7DtD so much coz i don't even know HOW TO ddig
Fluffy, what I'm gonna tell you is a secret and it is very important this remains between us; Ok here it comes, you ready?
There's a thing called "a shovel" in 7daystodie, and very much like in real life, you can use it to dig in the ground!!!! :O
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What happened, anyway? Also, to not make this OT:
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He had to take care of some real life shizzle...
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I'll try to correct to the best of my abilities, and I'm improving things as I go along
Corrections = Red Improvements = Blue
So they continued on their venture and after a few hours of trekking they began to experience severe cramps in their stomachs: the group assumed it due to the hike and so they rested momentarily on the side of the road. One began to vomit. The group's concern grew as it began to rain. They quickly entered the nearest forest to take shelter. They constructed a camp and laid the sick individual (Note, I believe this should be replaced with a name) on a bed forged from sticks and leaves. Once he fell asleep, the group selected a member (Another name would be better) to travel back to the village, in order to receive help. As he approached the village, he noticed he neither saw nor heard anything; he was intrigued and he went to investigate. He soon discovered many corpses laying scattered on the ground, soaked in pools of blood and vomit. He knew something was awry as he reached for his gun and banged on the door of the closest (Home, hut, w/e), but was met with deafening silence. He summoned all his strength and smashed the (large, old, oak [use rule of 3 here]) door down, shards of wood flying into the air as he did so. Still met with no response, he began searching the house. As he neared the bedroom, a foul odour filled his nostrils, and he began to retch. (This next bit makes no sense to me but I'm sure you understand the context) He promptly left the building and soon realized the severity of the situation; the whole village had succumbed to the clutches of death. Panicked, he sprinted urgently to the two soldiers but found they too were deceased. "It must have been the soup" (lol) he pondered, yet that didn't explain why he hadn't met the same fate as the others. In his moment of wonder, he felt the life being sucked out of his body (inb4 blowjob jokes), before his limp body collapsed and lay lifeless on the (worn out concrete/gravel/dirt floor). In his final moments, as he rested, waiting for the inevitable, he caught a glimpse of the same stones he had seen before, sitting on the ground beside him and saw they too were infected.
Much better story now.
True it's better, but that's not how a 14 year old Dutch kid writes English; The vocabulary exceeds even that of an 18 year old
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bed made of sticks and leaves, after he fell asleep one of them went back to the village to ask help
dead corpses on the ground -> well corpses are already dead so : dead people
Last sentence does not make much sence.It also doesn't make sence that he suddenly mentions they're soldiers
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Since I'm not native English speaking, I'll correct the obvious mistakes:
in there stomach
there --> their
laid the most sick one of the most sick one
Wut?
he saw nether heard anything
He saw nor heard anything (I think)
but then why didn’t I died did he think
Wut? First: But then why didn't I die; Did he think???? rephrase that sentence and use other tenses.
meanwhile he was thinking that he collapsed and died to
Meanwhile --> While he was... and died too*
Also the construction of many of your sentences is just bad. I still have to find correct punctuation in your whole story
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In honor of Jack Avenger, may his path cross Sammy's path soon again
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my roof:lagged out and was deleted
joux put a car on it
collapsed becaus i forgot my pillarsClassic joux!
Not everyone plays 7dtd all the time duck smh
Yeah it's been a while since I played intensively
Last time was when I needed to rescue Feng from 7th day horde 
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Damn I want Arma!
10 for me please!
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Photoshop
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My secret is out?! I must vanish from the world! Darn you evil banana!
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