Posts by The Killer

Saw some videos from youtube about the game (TheRPGMinx ftw) and it looks awesomesauce to play with friends. Downloaded it now, just waiting on some friendios to play with

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Fuck yea, my first horror game that is not free

But... You just got it for free?

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oh cool

HE IS MOCKING YOU @lexvhw

WHAT YOU GONNA DO ABOUT IT?

HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM?

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shut up killer xD

Make me. Tie me up and ball-gag me, then when I try to resist, whip me because I've been naughty. And don't forget to choke me often...

Brb need a fap.

I feel so privileged to have already won

A summary needs an overall explanation of the plot without giving away spoilers to the audience. You want to reveal setting, characters and the theme - what is this movie about and who's in it?

That being said, something along the lines of this would be a good summary:

"Roy Dillion is a 25 year old con artist living in Los Angeles. After a simple con goes wrong, he is left fatally wounded and is rushed to the hospital by his mother, Lilly, who he hasn't seen for 8 years. Whilst in recovery, his mother meets Moira, Roy's lover, and the two take an instant disliking to one another. The (movie/novel) revolves around the growing hatred between the three con veterans, as their lust for riches, romance and revenge tear each other apart, until only one is left standing..."

You don't want the summary to be too short, because you lose detail and the reader's attention. Too long and the reader will become bored and will simply move on. It needs to be quick, powerful and leaving you wanting for more.

Hope this somewhat helps

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but he declines and slaps her

brb gonna make a better story

Edit: wrote a story, story is actually meant to be summary -_-

I would love to help, but this is a summary, rather than a story. If it were a story, I would happily help, but seeing as I would need to read the work before aiding you with your summary, I'm afraid I am of little use to you.

Good shit this

Ez gaem ez lief

I'll try to correct to the best of my abilities, and I'm improving things as I go along

Corrections = Red Improvements = Blue

So they continued on their venture and after a few hours of trekking they began to experience severe cramps in their stomachs: the group assumed it due to the hike and so they rested momentarily on the side of the road. One began to vomit. The group's concern grew as it began to rain. They quickly entered the nearest forest to take shelter. They constructed a camp and laid the sick individual (Note, I believe this should be replaced with a name) on a bed forged from sticks and leaves. Once he fell asleep, the group selected a member (Another name would be better) to travel back to the village, in order to receive help. As he approached the village, he noticed he neither saw nor heard anything; he was intrigued and he went to investigate. He soon discovered many corpses laying scattered on the ground, soaked in pools of blood and vomit. He knew something was awry as he reached for his gun and banged on the door of the closest (Home, hut, w/e), but was met with deafening silence. He summoned all his strength and smashed the (large, old, oak [use rule of 3 here]) door down, shards of wood flying into the air as he did so. Still met with no response, he began searching the house. As he neared the bedroom, a foul odour filled his nostrils, and he began to retch. (This next bit makes no sense to me but I'm sure you understand the context) He promptly left the building and soon realized the severity of the situation; the whole village had succumbed to the clutches of death. Panicked, he sprinted urgently to the two soldiers but found they too were deceased. "It must have been the soup" (lol) he pondered, yet that didn't explain why he hadn't met the same fate as the others. In his moment of wonder, he felt the life being sucked out of his body (inb4 blowjob jokes), before his limp body collapsed and lay lifeless on the (worn out concrete/gravel/dirt floor). In his final moments, as he rested, waiting for the inevitable, he caught a glimpse of the same stones he had seen before, sitting on the ground beside him and saw they too were infected.

Much better story now.

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In honor of Jack Avenger, may his path cross Sammy's path soon again

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Would make a joke about his roof, but that'd be taking things to a whole new level.

I really like puns.

Illuminati KKK Ebola member? I trusted you Lex.