Posts by Crispy Bacon

  • Pls help me by ccorrecting my task :D

    Quote from Fluffy Duck

    Can you guys correct mistakes or tell them to me :D this is for a lot of points (school) idc if it's a lame story or not just tell me if i made any mistakes and correct them if you want . PLS :D
    Alternative end.So they continued on their trip and after a few hours of walking they started to feel cramps in there stomach, they thought it was because of the long trip so they stopped and had a break next to the road. One of them had vomited they were worried and it started to rain. They went to the nearest forest to find some shelter, they made a camp and laid the most sick one of the most sick one on a bed made of sticks and leaves, after he fell asleep one of them went back to the village to ask help, as he approached the village he saw nether heard anything he was surprised and he went into the village, he saw some dead corpses on the ground so he grabbed his gun and knocked on a door, no one opened. He smashed the door and searched the house, as he came closer to the bedroom, the smell became worse. He went inside the house and then he realized the whole village was dead. Panicked he ran back to the other two soldiers but they were also dead. It must have been the soup but then why didn’t I died did he think, meanwhile he was thinking that he collapsed and died to. But while he collapsed he saw the same stones on the ground and saw they were infected.


    So they continued their trip. After a few hours of walking they started to get cramps in their stomachs, and thinking it was because of the long walk they decided to stop and have a break just of the road.
    One of them suddenly started vomitting, worrying the others. And if that wasn't enouph, it also started to rain. They went to the closeby forest in search for some shelter. Under the trees they made a camp and laid the sick guy on a bed made of sticks and leaves.


    After the poor guy fell asleep, one of the groupmembers went back to the village to ask for help. As he approached the village however, he saw nor heared anything that would indicate any sign of life. That didn't mean there were no people. Seeing some corpses on the road before him, he panicked. He took a gun he found on a dead body and began knocking on the door of a nearby house. No answer. He shot the lock. The recoil of the gun in his hand made his knuckles smash against his cheek. Ignoring the pain, he went through the now-opened door. No-one. An unappealing smell came from the stairs on his left. Fearful but curious he slowly walked to to the first floor. The smell became stronger and stronger. He put his right hand before his nose, while opening a door. In front of him he found a huge window, overlooking the small village. The view shocked him deeply. His eyes amplified, while his face lost all its colour. The gun fell on the ground. As fast as his legs could carry him, he ran back downstairs. Through the door, through the main street. "I need to get away!" Those were the only words circling in his brain. "I need to get away!" The forest became closer and closer. "I need to get..." Arriving at the place where he left the two soldiers, his face became even more pale. Two deceased bodies laid in front of him.
    "the soup..." the reality of what happened struck him so hard, that his knees couldn't support his body any more. "that's why I didn't feel anything..." The ground turned before his eyes. Or was it him turning to the ground? He didn't know, nor did he care. He caught a glimpse of some stones, laying on the ground that quickly came towards him. He vagely thought he remembered them. Time to think about it he didn't have anymore. Before his head reached the ground, everything already had become silent and dark. Peacefully dark...





    Haven't read the original story, since I probably know it and that would ruin the alterate ending.
    I'm not a native english speaker, so there are probably tons of mistakes and wrongly used words in this small ending.
    Still, hope I've been able to help ya ;)

  • Your favorite music

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    In honor of Jack Avenger, may his path cross Sammy's path soon again


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  • lol...

    Quote from laughtilldie


    which drawing program u use?


    I use Gimp2 and Mangastudio. Gimp is freeware, so prob best to use. Don't forget to convert (or 'export') your GIMPfile after drawing, cause most uploading devices cannot read the default gimp-file.
    For simplicity, like drawing a line, you can also use Paint.net . Not very usefull for anything else but drawing some lines and saving images though.

  • Inactive members

    Quote from !>Iss<!

    hmmm ya ... i am sorry, it s my own fault . . . i didn t make the inactivity report ... also i don t realy visit the forum, the last time i used my forum account was to make the application.
    i didn t play zps because of my exams, i am studying hard this year soo i don t usually open steam.
    i will keep playing 4 hours in each week until i finish my exams ...


    Don't worry, since you're playing you are still a member.
    But please when you go away, make an inactivity report. Otherwise we cannot see the difference between someone that has to study and someone that just got bored and left the community without telling anyone ;)

  • lol...

    Quote from Laurens

    It was all moving / packed together like this. It didnt break. A mysterious gravity field kept it together.
    I Dont know what kind of technology they research at umbrella corporations but it looks like they started building a black hole :P


    They were like: "Oh no , a deadly zombie virus is not dangerous enough. Lets make a black hole!"


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    meh, if it were a black hole you wouldn't be able to see them ;)

  • 5

    Quote from lexvhw

    Well... it's not really racist because islam is not a race Kappa People need to learn the difference between racism and xenophobia. Every case of racism is xenophobia, but not every case of xenophobia is racism ;)


    racisme (=racism) in dutch does not only apply for races, but for every group of people seen different by another group of people

  • 5


    Around 15% of the people in the Netherlands follow the islam, from which most btw do not really follow their faith, like most catholics here. The "Randstad", the metropol of cities in the province Holland is even built up for 25 to 30% of foreigners, be it muslims be it others.
    So what?
    Every faith has extremists. That this era is marked by islamist extremists is sad, but what about the catholics going rampage in the CAR, or the jewish occupation of former Palestina? Not to speak about other faiths, and just madman that do not follow a religion.
    99.99% of all people just try to live their lives, no matter what they believe. It is that 0.01% that ruins it for the rest. To speak out against a complete religion only because of what happened in france is just racism, and not the fake racism some think we have on sammys, but real racism.