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    there were a girl name yokuand she love doll she played with then take them to school and never leave there sideone night she never wake up and we did not know what to dothere mom and dad did not knowwhat to do and they called a god helper and this two boys were checking the hall way and they disapeared and we found nothingthey did not know what to there there son was still sleeping and they can fix itthe mom called her mom and the her mom said she had a dream in the mom house andshe went to her son room and she saw a black thing standing next to the son and she said what to you want and the black thing point at sonthen she say a red creeping thing and back of the dadthen it disapeardthen the dad mom came up and told the dad that you had the same thing you son is haveing and she show him photos and he ghost came closer and closerthen the mom said to dad that the way you can save your son is to go to the other side and get out to find his bodyinghe turn to a ghost and went up stairs and went to a door and found athe son andcame down stairs and the son woke up and the dad found the ghost that was hauting him and talk some crap and the ghost was smileingthen the dad woke up and the so nwas eating and the dad said e wont be needing the photos anymore then the mom look scared then took a photos and look at it and got more scare and the dad scarem at her and said Y YOU TAKE THAT PHOTOS YOU KNOW IT NORMIA NOW ND KILLED HERthe the dad life was calling him and she saw the mom dead and she look at the photos and it was the ghost that hauted him and the ghost took over his body and the dad was behind him and said honeyTHE ENDokay it bad spelling becuase i wrote this when i was 8 so it bad dspellingenjoy this

    [S-ZPS] Zach : we dont want to read some 8 yaer olds crap.
    you can make a complaint about it but dont be a dick dude.
    how is it spam when everyone enjoying writeing storys.
    if you dont then dont bother to write any storys in here.
    its your choice im not forceing you to make storys im just saying that i make a thread where creative people who like writeing storys can write storys here it not spam

    hope you know the story you made is gonna come true
    i know some stuff not alot of people know about the world
    i know the truth if you real listen i will teach you

    well hes 12 so im gusseing me cause im 12


    yo im so mad i just made chapter 3 of my story but my game crash and it made the site turn off and deleteing all my work and writeing i did so i would have to write it all agian ;(
    i was going to work on my story all night but after what just happen im rageing my self to bed but when it happen to me i was like :cursing: :cursing: :cursing: :cursing: :cursing: X(

    CHAPTER 1 The elf

    My name is shinya.
    I was just getting ready to go to bed and before i went to sleep i saw a elf
    I woke up and i had a golden key in my hands.
    I went downstairs and my mom and dad was sick.
    they could not talk they where moveing like zombies.
    i showed my dad and he just took it and put it in his pocke.
    I HAD to go to school so i went to school and everyone was not talking moveing slowly.
    it was a bit strange cause the teacher was sleeping no one was doing anything about it.
    the key must have something to do with this.
    but what am im going to do?
    i was walking home and i smell fire for a long time and when i made it home and... my house ;( was on fire..


    chapter 2 the start of everything.
    my house was set on fire that day i can still remember everything i will tell you what happen next.
    i saw my house on fire and it burning everywhere and when i turn around and look at the city far away there was fog in the air, i heard shootings, people screaming everything!
    i turn around and my dad come out of the fire house.
    DAD!!!!! DAD!!!!! you okay what happen and where mom?!!???
    he ignore me and turn around and look at me and jump on me and try to eat me!!!.
    DAD stop PLEASE WHAT YOU DOING.
    i had no choice but to use my knife in my pocket.
    i stab him 12 times.
    i was really scare and confuse about what is happening
    first everyone sick now the whole world on fire what is happening!!!.
    the sun shine down into my dad pocket and i saw a shineing.
    it was key i grab it into my hands and i put in it mine pocket to keep it safe cause this key might be the cause of this!
    i started crying cause i was scared that this world would end but i remember i saw a elf before maybe HE might be the one.
    but where can a elf be?
    i will have to find him.
    when i turn around over millons of people looking like zombies where comeing to me with full speed.
    i nearly pee my self when i saw that cause i knew that i was going to die in the moment.
    what will i do?
    well i gusse i try to run but they will out run me.
    i said to my self i will always die trying so i grab my knife and ran to the zombie horde and i stab one and kick him but they all surrounded me and i was in the ground getting ready to be eaten.
    Well bye world :( but my key started to shine and it flew up into the air and teleported me.
    what?? just happen?
    the key had just save my life.
    okay i know whats going on now
    and i will survive this and save the world of it curse of walking dead people!


    chapter 3 could there be more survivors?


    i went to a store and got a gun yea im too young but im strong to be able to hold it.
    i graba handgun and some ammo and grenades and a sword.
    i was walking everywhere wondering where to go and it was getting pretty dark i would have to get inside.
    but i could not find a place and it was getting dark.
    i turn around cause i heared a noise behind me.
    whos there? hello?
    i grab my sword but i got hit from behind and pass out.
    i woke up in a room full of darkness but only one light faceing me.
    i heard a noise in the corner of the room.
    it sounded like foot steps so i knew it was someone comeing.
    3 people came out of the darkness and started to ask me stuff.
    what is going on in this world?
    HOW im suppose to know, i had to kill my die and i cant even find my mom.
    they grinned and reach there hand to there pocket.
    then what IS THIS.
    what he took out of his pocket was the golden key i had in my pocket.
    i was talking in my mindsaying,i cant let them know that the key save my life cause they might take it so i gotta do something hm...
    oh that key yea i had that since i was six six cause my dad gave it to me.
    okay then i just keep hold of it. stay here me and my guys will disgust about what we will do about you. so stay here.
    as they walk inside the room i was thinking of how i should get out cause i was tied up.
    i relise they did not take the knife out of my secret pocket i have its a pocket under a pocket so no one will see it.
    i grab the knife out of my pocket and i cutted the rope with my knife.
    i broken free but i had no weapons.
    when i turn around i saw my sword i had.
    i picked up my sword and before iwas able to turn around they pointed a gun at me.
    where do you think your going.
    I thought i was going to die but a loud noise was comeing intop of us.
    what.. was that?


    CHAPTER 4 type-0
    what.. was that?
    we heard a noise on top of us but it sounded like foot steps
    the sound got bigger and bigger.
    whatever that was is comeing to us.
    we must go NOW!!
    we started running to the exit but everything was like a maze.
    sooner of later the wall intop of us came down.
    what came down was a huge monster that had kill two of the people with us.
    me and the other guy was running away but he had tripped.
    he had died.
    i needed to find my key and get out of....
    the wall broken down in front of me and was the monster.
    he grab my neck and started chokeing me.
    i did not know what to do!!!.
    i grab my sword out of my back and stab him in the heart.
    he got down to the ground but 2 secs later he got back up.
    can he not die?
    i ran into the room and grab my key and jump out of the window.
    i was outside everywhere was dark but it was comeing daylight soon.
    the monster jump out of the window and scream THE KEY!!!!!!.
    i knew what he wanted. it was the key he wanted

    ^ I know this is the plot from insidious buddy :whistling:


    But I do like the idea of this thread. Someone get Draka in here for story time :D


    hhahah i know right well i just watch it when i was 8 years old so i wanted to make a copy of it for some reason =_


    btw I have made a 22 chapter long story in my profile and will make a part for it cause i made a ending with a like there gonnabe a part 2 but never made it i will maybe remake it with better writeing and makea part two

    okay im going to write a story of my own with my good spelling now i still bad tho =)


    A Girl named Shyly had a Doll named darly and they like playing with eachother.
    Everyday they play, go to sleep togeter she always put darly on the chair next to her when she sleeps.
    Always every night.
    but one day she let darly sleep right next to her in the bed.
    (Shyly fell to sleep)
    When she woke up and notice that darly was not with her.!!
    She turn around and darly was on the chair looking at her.
    (she look down toward darly hands).
    (her heart starts beating fast out of fear when she have saw what darly had in her hands was a....)
    KNIFE.
    Darly was holding a knife grinning at her.
    Later on that night she burn and detroyed the doll. later on news girl killed. father saids it was the doll it WAS THE DOLL. See this is the doll it name tag is darly they found this doll outside kinda burnt but they fix it up.
    (shyly watches)
    (She drops her cup full of milk and start crying of fear, cause she knew she was going to be next.
    prolouge
    13 years later....
    Shyly is now 23 years old.
    she have went out to find the doll and destroy it for good and this time make sure it will never come back and haunt her.
    her memiores will never disapear....

    okay im very creative i like makeing storys so im makeing this one so people can write short/long story it can be anything and i would like to read it to cause i like makeing storys im gonna make alot ofcourse so beaware of that so i will make a scary story

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    this is my doing my daily ninja thing

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    just good


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    nice one that sure made her not kill her self hhaahaaha i will start to
    hahah you have a bounceing boy hm... (throws th e baby on the ground) oh... i gusse not


    well you sure have a fever are right.
    so i can cure it with cowbell right!
    no
    a cowbell cant cure any discease
    especilycancer
    witch is what you have

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    SAD LOVE cool song
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    cool song to


    hard rock

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    coool song


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    one of my favorites song and band but he only made a few good songs and shutdown ;( well listen to this one to its really good.


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    this one
    is
    GOOOD